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July 24, 2005
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:iconchickenfingers:
I don't need to say anything but this is gorgeous.
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:icongloomknight:
Such a great idea! I love the design :D
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:iconpopgrafix:
This is brilliance. This is the level I expect from you. The quality that makes me cringe and crumble in the dust with awe, respect and jealousy...
Every detail treated with the same amount of effort... you took the time to work it all out in color so... patiently, I suppose.
It has some eighties chique in it that I like A LOT! I won't start about the wrist again, that's just your thing. But what about the notes on the bottom? Of course it's an original graphic element, but I think thare's a story behind it...
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:iconmaki-ubermach:
do the wrists look so thick that it breaks the flow of the picture? thats really my concern over if it looks good or not. if its distracting and out of place then that is totally understandable and i'll try something a lil different.
when it came to the notes on the bottom thats where i got kinda stuck because i didnt know how to treat it.. i thought the colors were treated patiently but then i was so patient that i couldnt impuse kick into it and so i think it lost some flavor but i did gain better effort i guess. i'll find a balance. :p
but yia, the notes look kinda like out of place i think or like they need something more cuz there is a lil story behind it.
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:iconpopgrafix:
No, don't change the wrists. It belongs to your style and it's not unnatural. I promise I won't mention it again.
Yes you're right about the notes... they're a bit apart from the rest of the illustration... Maybe you should have used them in the background? Like ~CrisVector used the stave in his Music Android... And what exactly is the story behind it (if you don't mind me being nosy)?
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:iconmaki-ubermach:
0 o 0 you can mention them all you want! i dont want you to hold back and i trust your artistic judegement a bit over my own so i love to know what you think in your personal opinion.
and also thank you for the reference. it always helps me out to understand your point of view better and opens my doors to different artistic elements to reach out to. i think i wanted to add words but i help back because i was thinking that i didnt want the picture to become to dependent on the text. thought too long on it. :p
story on it:
well...i was at work and it was all quiet and i noticed how work has become like my study center. theres no tv or ppl to distract me for more than a minute...blah blah blah..so i guess i was thinking about where is my life at the moment. i'm running around town all the time and never get to eat home food...never have time for anything but somehow i make affection and caring about others at number one on my priority list. also thinking about how when adults see me, they see this girl they cant understnad but they know she wants to be friendly and affectionate..its so much it doesnt make sense huh..? been kinda confused lately. but yia, the entire housekeeping and kitchen staff at the hospital treat me like their my legion of grandparents and spoil me here and there which makes me feel like they understand that i've been deprived of family style affection..i know they dont know but i like to pretend thats why they do it i guess.. so yia..the music..hmnn... i was listening to 80's again and heard a song that said "no more love on the run" and thought love on thr run was such a cool phrase and i interpreted that like fastfood emotion on the go. man, my head hurts..but yia. ramble ramble.
music has been my voice of rhyme and reason growing up and i think the pattern of notes and music speaks for itself so i wanted to say that the person i had affection for at the moment makes me feel chipper. thats where the text should have came in or some thing that visualy led the pic and the borders together..i'll get the hang of it one day.
so in conclusion it's like a mini diary of that day. @_ @
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:iconmaki-ubermach:
i'm .. just gonna shutup and stand in the corner now.. *eats her crackers*
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:iconpopgrafix:
Woah girl... you can be so... intense... More than my recovering-from-a-depression brain can handle sometimes...
But that's okay. Just be yourself. That's how I like you.
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=IrisHime Jul 25, 2005  Student Digital Artist
ooh, Maki I think the colored one is great!
your colors are always so livly!
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